Madness Unbreakable 1 An insult to the Madness series.
First of all, just to get this out of the way, don't tell your potential viewers to cut you some slack for this being your first project. People don't care! They'll speak thier mind, no matter what.
Ok, so since this is your first flash, I'll tell you how mutch this sucks, then tell you were you need improvement. This movie doesn't capture the spirit of Madness well or represent the characters well. The animation is terrible, as if it was made with powerpoint!
Ok, were you need improvement. First of all, replace that hip-hop with some unique music; we're all tired of overused music styles. Second, work on the animation. Don't release a movie until its up to par compared to the big boys. Study other great movies; check for smooth animation and clean/unique artwork. Then make you're movie and check constantly for quality.
Finally, don't try to make a movie that is supposed to be like one of the great series(es) for your first flashes.
